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A Little Cold Spot (Free verse) by emeraldskies

There's a space Empty and waiting Someone should fill it As I rest and sleep I run my hands over The cold spot The empty sheets And I wonder Where you are And if you ever Think of me And if you save That cold spot Like I save mine Just for you

<{Baba^Yaga}> 8-Jul-03/7:42 PM
That could be chiseled more, but it's much better.




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