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A Shining Light

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 Jun 2003 · 7 comments

I was born, I have lived, And I will die. But once, just once I have known a shining light, A light that shone so bright that it burnt its way deep into my soul. A light that fired my dreams, brightened my darkest times, And filled me with warmth. And then it was gone. Taken from me without warning by circumstance, Leaving a hole in my soul that can not be filled. An open wound in my heart that will not heal, Why? Is it my life to not have love, To not feel my heart beat for a light that never fades. Someone once said; 'To have loved and lost, is better than to have never loved at all', Well I say that this person has never known love. It is better to have never loved, Because the pain of love, true love lost, Is unbearable to anyone with a soul. In a world such as ours, A world where we kill for possessions, religion and hate. Is it so unreasonable to want to love? To long for that shining light to return, once again to fire my soul. I was born, I have lived And I HAVE died.

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7 comments

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-Jun-03/7:21 PM Reply
DENVER
THE LAST DINOSAUR
HE'S MY FRIEND AND A WHOLE LOT MORE
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-Jun-03/7:21 PM Reply
If you know what I mean
[n/a] <~> › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-Jun-03/7:39 PM Reply
what DO you mean?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › <~> 9-Jun-03/7:58 PM Reply
We don't really care if everywhere we go people stop and stare at our friend dino.
[n/a] <~> › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-Jun-03/8:22 PM Reply
and when they gawk, (they often will), he'll roar, and give them quite a thrill?
[7] RealmOfSong 9-Jun-03/7:51 PM Reply
I like this because I totally understand it. And this part :

Someone once said;
'To have loved and lost, is better than to have never loved at all',
Well I say that this person has never known love.

It is better to have never loved,
Because the pain of love, true love lost,
Is unbearable to anyone with a soul.

:is very very true, at least to me.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › RealmOfSong 9-Jun-03/7:59 PM Reply
Your teenage insights are incredibly valuable! Perhaps next you can point out that racism is wrong!