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Hiding from the Day (Free verse) by loneshadow29
Dark shadows Hiding midst the night Fearing the light of day Knowing of what will come If the light gives form to these lonely creatures The pain inside amplified In its terrifying beauty With each moment Basking in the light They bask in the darkness Which fills their broken souls So, the dark shadows hide Where the light cannot reach Here no one can see their pain Only know that it exists Lonely shadows in the night Never again to see the light of day

Up the ladder: if only i could tell
Down the ladder: A Shining Light

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7689
Posted: June 4, 2003 1:14 PM PDT; Last modified: June 4, 2003 1:14 PM PDT
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[6] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 4-Jun-03/4:33 PM | Reply
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