Poemranker [Poem: Once] [by phoenixxx] Thu Nov 21 09:56:53 PST 2024

[0] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 14-Jun-03/9:28 AM | Reply

The first two lines are plagiarised from 1984 fag.

[n/a] phoenixxx @ 24.158.33.107 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 14-Jun-03/11:03 AM | Reply

They aren't plagarized, they're borrowed. If you're going to try and be insulting in a forum such as this please use correct spelling and grammar. Also, try and see if you can refrain from the foul language.

[n/a] beakism @ 81.86.208.92 > phoenixxx | 14-Jun-03/12:10 PM | Reply

dfakjgruehgoahrhioaeeohirgegaerniopnipeanhierilrenklarwgn;n;bknoairneogeraonirea

who's a fucking moron?

[0] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > phoenixxx | 14-Jun-03/12:43 PM | Reply

I am impressed by your stilted way of talking and your astounding maturity!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111

I am trying to see if I can refrain from "the" foul language. FUCK FUCK OH NO IT LOOKS LIKE I CAN'T, WELL I'LL TRY HARDER NEXT TIME.

[0] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > phoenixxx | 14-Jun-03/12:46 PM | Reply

Also, you will find that "plagiarised" is the correct way to spell it in England, whereas "plagarized" isn't the correct way to spell it anywhere.

[0] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > phoenixxx | 14-Jun-03/12:46 PM | Reply

Also, you will find that "borrowing" without "citing reference" is what "plagiarising" "is".

[n/a] phoenixxx @ 24.158.33.107 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 15-Jun-03/10:07 AM | Reply

I apologize. I was inspired by those 2 lines to write this poem when I first read the book. I used the lines and then didn't look at the poem for over a year, therefore did not remember from whence they were taken.

[0] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > phoenixxx | 15-Jun-03/10:39 AM | Reply

The lines that "inspired" you from the book are given as an example of a "driveling song". What, Sir, do you think of that?

[5] richa @ 195.92.168.171 | 14-Jun-03/10:29 AM | Reply

I guess you've rubbed someone up the wrong way the sheer number of zeros you get is quite impressive

I do think these poems need a lot more personal thought and insight though they seem a bit assinine
and the statements seem unqualified

I got loads of bad marks when i first came on here. I guess you have to read the work of your audience and learn some lessons from it

Then if you get good you can do your own thing again a nd be pretentious like a proper artist!

[0] StuntHornist @ 69.14.157.52 | 21-Jul-03/8:50 PM | Reply

Dark Angel, it's amazing. You commented everything I was thining when I read this, except for one thing: It's not only a "driveling song" in the book, it was a song composed by a MACHINE for the benefit of the unwashed masses. Isn't that so much worse?