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Once (Free verse) by phoenixxx

A smile, a word And the dreams you stirred Once made me feel so alive A key, a ring Once a beautiful thing At times kept my head in the sky A note, a glance And that amorous trace Used to make life worth while A book, a game OH!-its all the same In a world that’s been defiled Hopes and fears Through all these years Have kept me going along Now I sing and shout And let the pain drive out In the words of an unsung song

richa 14-Jun-03/10:29 AM
I guess you've rubbed someone up the wrong way the sheer number of zeros you get is quite impressive

I do think these poems need a lot more personal thought and insight though they seem a bit assinine
and the statements seem unqualified

I got loads of bad marks when i first came on here. I guess you have to read the work of your audience and learn some lessons from it

Then if you get good you can do your own thing again a nd be pretentious like a proper artist!




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