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Once (Free verse) by phoenixxx

A smile, a word And the dreams you stirred Once made me feel so alive A key, a ring Once a beautiful thing At times kept my head in the sky A note, a glance And that amorous trace Used to make life worth while A book, a game OH!-its all the same In a world that’s been defiled Hopes and fears Through all these years Have kept me going along Now I sing and shout And let the pain drive out In the words of an unsung song

StuntHornist 21-Jul-03/8:50 PM
Dark Angel, it's amazing. You commented everything I was thining when I read this, except for one thing: It's not only a "driveling song" in the book, it was a song composed by a MACHINE for the benefit of the unwashed masses. Isn't that so much worse?




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