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Platform (Free verse) by Exiled_humanity
Stood upon a deserted
Dirty grey platform
Waiting with in a shattered
Shelter
Itâs patched and dented
Metallic blue silver walls
Protects me from the cold breath
Of the unseen beast
That howls
Outside this hall
Waiting and preying
Preying to pounce
Waiting for me
So it can maul
Me with itâs frozen claws
Chilling my frightened blood
Even more.
The smashed glass roof
Of the shattered shelter
Does little
If any
To stop the downpour
Of icy spears of spittle
From the salivating creature
Like the hungry howls
They penetrate the hall
They saturate my clothes
Leaving me naked, expose and
Alone
With the hidden, howling, heat-hungry horror
That lurks outside
The shattered lidless shoe box
Thatâs set adrift
In the abandoned
Seas
Of silent unease.
The plug shaped yellow face
Looms in the distance
A threatening appreciation
Suspended with in time
Moving closer fast but
Seemingly
Sitting
Still on the horizon
Will it whiz past?
Will it stop with a metallic
Ta-whine
Open its maw
With a hiss
And provide
Salvation from
The monsters midst?
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8413
Posted: June 4, 2003 10:59 AM PDT; Last modified: June 4, 2003 10:59 AM PDT
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