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Within (Other) by Schizophrenic
I feel your tongue Cold damper, hot skin Oh how I long For you within; blemishing the virginity And trampling the sin, Oh, how I long for infinity For you within; I feel you touch Polyester has-been, How I want so much for you within; I kill for the pleasure, And as I give in, Something I can measure Is you within.

Up the ladder: Platform
Down the ladder: A Dream, A Bad One

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8408
Posted: June 5, 2003 8:19 PM PDT; Last modified: June 5, 2003 8:19 PM PDT
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[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 6-Jun-03/9:54 PM | Reply
"You know what that sound is Mr. Anderson?" The sound of inevitability. *bang*
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