| Re: Causation by fevriere |
10-Mar-04/6:25 AM |
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I'm miles from home, I'm hurting, I'm in a cafe, and I write. I write.
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| Re: Zodiac's Visit to Micky D's by Oej-Oej |
10-Mar-04/10:14 AM |
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Wacky numbers -- hilarious!!!
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10-Mar-04/3:26 PM |
Guys, guys, look at what we've become. Never before has so much guff been defecated on one poeme. We all have something to be ashamed about, some more than others, and my overall impression at having soiled myself in this debate is one of indescribable disgust at Joe-joe's use of the mouth-plum: "like all your arguements this one too is baseless and without merit". In short, the opinions expressed on this page can only be described as "pig ignorant", "stultifyingly ill-informed" and "bow'ls".
Apart from my opinions, which were excellent.
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| Re: dear jim d. by peaceseeker |
14-Mar-04/2:50 PM |
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15-Mar-04/8:13 AM |
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You really badly wish you were a medieval princess.
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| Re: My Boyfriend's Afro Pick by horus8 |
16-Mar-04/6:59 AM |
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"Jeremi Britt Handrinos' first collection delivers an exemplary paradox of the authenticity of life lived put into words. He toys with conventional forms like a magician and throws off the surrogate voices of the past with his own pure and stark imagery. Bold, free, raucous at times, Handrinos splits the mundane, as sudden as a cut on the finger then leaves you to taste your own blood." -10-
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| Re: I think of you by singinkygal |
16-Mar-04/2:06 PM |
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Great use of 'die' to rhyme with 'cry'!!!!!1111 -10-
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| Re: New Years Eve, 1999 by wilco |
18-Mar-04/12:00 PM |
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I like the way you have used arbitrary line breaks to turn ordinary prose into stilted poetry.
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| Re: Dying Harvest by Richard |
19-Mar-04/3:58 AM |
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lolin all da way 2 da bank! nobut seriizly gud job :P) -10-
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| Re: Senseless Murder by Sapphire2589 |
20-Mar-04/12:00 PM |
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Linkin Park lyrics + ellipses = GREAT POETRY!!!!!!! 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Re: Snow Day by Standby |
20-Mar-04/4:37 PM |
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Are you sure you didn't see yourself, someone should fuck your shit up for writing this.
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| Re: I am by Sapphire2589 |
20-Mar-04/4:42 PM |
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| Re: Puritans by zodiac |
20-Mar-04/4:48 PM |
Mediocrity code: 20841404
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20-Mar-04/4:52 PM |
Mediocrity code: 21580481
-8-
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20-Mar-04/4:54 PM |
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| Re: Untitled *involves taking pills and cutting with razors* by AskittlesK |
21-Mar-04/3:43 PM |
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I'm sorry I was mean to you before. I guess we're pretty similar really. I've been cutting myself for three years how about you? I guess I like the feeling of power it gives me. I only wish others could see the pain inside. That's why I like poemranker people really understand here. Tell us your heart. xx
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21-Mar-04/3:46 PM |
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| Re: Beah Richards by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
21-Mar-04/3:53 PM |
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Well done Jeremi! Your poetry is really coming along now.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
22-Mar-04/9:43 AM |
Now the bow'ls don't work
They just make things worse
And I know I'll need to dump again
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
24-Mar-04/8:43 AM |
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Worse than a guff-scented electro-cosy full of spazz.
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