on Loving You More Each Day by Katrina
23 May 2004, 5:14 AM
This is amazing... you must really know what its like to be in love when noone understands you... you put it so perfectly... dont listen to what anyone else tells you, you have a gift and you should never stop writing... 10...
on Secada (Parody of sasha's lying vagina) by Bachus
24 May 2004, 4:00 PM
You missed a 'brown'. Otherwise this would have contained every single motif you've copied from -=Dark_Angel=- in the last 2 years.
on The Babe in the Alligator Pajamas by caitydee
26 May 2004, 5:52 AM
That's right! Your life has utterly failed, so why not produce another miniature failure in an unbelievably misguided attempt to fix it? 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
on Hiding by QuirkyWonder
13 Jun 2004, 3:45 PM
Tucked away in a bap of shame.
on reflexion v.3 - Cannibalization and Twilight by Don-Quixote
10 Jun 2004, 3:30 AM
What did the cannibal do after dumping his girlfried?
Wiped his bum.
Wiped his bum.
on Fighting before bed by zodiac
19 May 2004, 3:23 AM
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on Fighting before bed by zodiac
19 May 2004, 3:23 AM
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on The butchers consolation (Kyrielle) by SupremeDreamer
19 May 2004, 5:39 AM
Bulging with a bum-like idiocy.
on Pills by erickvisions
19 May 2004, 5:42 AM
Fantastic use of "twitching" to rhyme with "itching" and "bitching"!!!1 -10-
on Pills by erickvisions
19 May 2004, 6:16 AM
WARNING: HIDDEN LEWD ALERT!!!!!!!!
"Cold and white... stiff and dry...
some... new...d...
have her... Or...a...l...l...y...
deep...ear... re...ming
bit..ing... her ...chin
...finger...ing... her...aking...rug
sheâs taking... It... a...n...all...y...
b..ake... his dar...t
i...m ...very t...ight
-10-
"Cold and white... stiff and dry...
some... new...d...
have her... Or...a...l...l...y...
deep...ear... re...ming
bit..ing... her ...chin
...finger...ing... her...aking...rug
sheâs taking... It... a...n...all...y...
b..ake... his dar...t
i...m ...very t...ight
-10-
on some deleted poem
5 Jun 2004, 5:48 AM
What is the correct name for a flock of turds? I believe it is an "inconvenience".
on paperclips by son of the moon
5 Jun 2004, 4:50 PM
Someone put them in the bin.
on asleep in the night by saylor3000
5 Jun 2004, 5:10 PM
Tug off again probably.
on Reflections of the Living Dead by SomeKindofPoet
20 May 2004, 12:43 AM
If this were a poeme narrated by a zombie who was sitting around in an old zombies' home, thinking about the times when he used to go around trying to eat people's brains, and how he saw most of his zombie friends shot in the head, and wondering whether it was all worth it, it would be ace.
-0-
-0-
on Unwed by gilded in gold
20 May 2004, 7:02 AM
Hauntingly beautiful. I really like your use of "face in hiding" as a metaphor for leprosy. -10-
Fear (Free verse) by Phalkon
i lay awake in bed
...
a million thoughts run through my head
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Thoughts (Free verse) by nicole081083
As I lie here in my bed
Many thoughts run through my head
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wait for sleep (Lyric) by xunitedx
i wait for sleep as i'm lying in my bed
but i can't stop these thoughts from running through my head
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Insomnia (Pimple) by BiggRobb
Every night that I lay down to bed,
I'm constantly bombarded with thoughts racing through my head;
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Adam's Apple (Lyric) by hotwire
Not enough words rush through my head
as I laid spend there in my bed
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Falling in Love (Free verse) by disturbedone182
I lie awake for hours upon my bed
While thoughts of her race through my head
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untitled: dedicated to my soldier/husband (Free verse) by SweetJuliet10
sitting here tonight alone in bed
a million things running through my head
-10-
i lay awake in bed
...
a million thoughts run through my head
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Thoughts (Free verse) by nicole081083
As I lie here in my bed
Many thoughts run through my head
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wait for sleep (Lyric) by xunitedx
i wait for sleep as i'm lying in my bed
but i can't stop these thoughts from running through my head
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Insomnia (Pimple) by BiggRobb
Every night that I lay down to bed,
I'm constantly bombarded with thoughts racing through my head;
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Adam's Apple (Lyric) by hotwire
Not enough words rush through my head
as I laid spend there in my bed
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Falling in Love (Free verse) by disturbedone182
I lie awake for hours upon my bed
While thoughts of her race through my head
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untitled: dedicated to my soldier/husband (Free verse) by SweetJuliet10
sitting here tonight alone in bed
a million things running through my head
-10-
on To Think I Am by SomeKindofPoet
21 May 2004, 2:51 PM
All your opinions are wrong, you colossal dunce. Thanks, -10-
on some deleted poem
1 Jun 2004, 2:24 AM
Bingo.
on Dave by DR Limerick
1 Jun 2004, 2:27 AM
on flying into the storm by herbgirlofbirkenau
1 Jun 2004, 3:12 AM
I looked at my backside in the mirror: it was covered in prawns. When that happens you know it's time to put down the pogo stick and get the fuck out of Shrimpsville.
I'm Dick Bumston, P.I.
I'm Dick Bumston, P.I.