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Free verse № 104185

asleep in the night

Member since 2004 · Posted 4 Jun 2004 · 8 comments

I sleep in the night Wondering what the next light might bring Will i live tomorrow or will i die I know that one should not worry But if you were to die tomorrow What would you do differently today?

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8 comments

[0] god'swife 4-Jun-04/3:27 PM Reply
I'd eat a double bacon cheeseburger with a large order of curly fries and a large vanilla shake.
[9] titan69 › god'swife 5-Jun-04/9:06 AM Reply
you would you fat get!!
[7] zodiac › titan69 5-Jun-04/3:09 PM Reply
It's git, you dumbass. And women can't be gits. It's against the rules.
[9] titan69 › zodiac 5-Jun-04/11:19 PM Reply
What a lode of shit Zodiac is get were i come from and you are the biggest on PR. And yes women can be gets there is no rules
YOU LOOSE.
[7] zodiac › titan69 6-Jun-04/6:45 AM Reply
Your spelling actually burns my eyes.

How can I give 'get' any credit when in a mere thirty words you've misspelled or otherwise botched 'load', 'shit,', 'zodiac', 'it's', 'git', 'gits.', 'There are', and 'lose'?
[7] zodiac › zodiac 6-Jun-04/7:08 AM Reply
"git Noun. An idiot or contemptible person. Although more commonly used, it is derived from 'get'."
- http://www.peevish.co.uk/slang/g.htm
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Jun-04/5:10 PM Reply
Tug off again probably.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Jun-04/5:11 PM Reply
Into a time capsule.