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asleep in the night (Free verse) by saylor3000
I sleep in the night Wondering what the next light might bring Will i live tomorrow or will i die I know that one should not worry But if you were to die tomorrow What would you do differently today?

Up the ladder: time's concubine
Down the ladder: Abuse

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Weighted score: 5.0238404
Overall Rank: 7403
Posted: June 4, 2004 10:07 AM PDT; Last modified: June 4, 2004 10:07 AM PDT
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Comments:
[0] god'swife @ 209.178.165.179 | 4-Jun-04/3:27 PM | Reply
I'd eat a double bacon cheeseburger with a large order of curly fries and a large vanilla shake.
[9] titan69 @ 62.31.23.18 > god'swife | 5-Jun-04/9:06 AM | Reply
you would you fat get!!
[7] zodiac @ 65.161.41.48 > titan69 | 5-Jun-04/3:09 PM | Reply
It's git, you dumbass. And women can't be gits. It's against the rules.
[9] titan69 @ 213.48.172.8 > zodiac | 5-Jun-04/11:19 PM | Reply
What a lode of shit Zodiac is get were i come from and you are the biggest on PR. And yes women can be gets there is no rules
YOU LOOSE.
[7] zodiac @ 65.161.41.48 > titan69 | 6-Jun-04/6:45 AM | Reply
Your spelling actually burns my eyes.

How can I give 'get' any credit when in a mere thirty words you've misspelled or otherwise botched 'load', 'shit,', 'zodiac', 'it's', 'git', 'gits.', 'There are', and 'lose'?
[7] zodiac @ 65.161.41.48 > zodiac | 6-Jun-04/7:08 AM | Reply
"git Noun. An idiot or contemptible person. Although more commonly used, it is derived from 'get'."
- http://www.peevish.co.uk/slang/g.htm
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 5-Jun-04/5:10 PM | Reply
Tug off again probably.
Into a time capsule.
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