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asleep in the night (Free verse) by saylor3000

I sleep in the night Wondering what the next light might bring Will i live tomorrow or will i die I know that one should not worry But if you were to die tomorrow What would you do differently today?

zodiac 6-Jun-04/6:45 AM
Your spelling actually burns my eyes.

How can I give 'get' any credit when in a mere thirty words you've misspelled or otherwise botched 'load', 'shit,', 'zodiac', 'it's', 'git', 'gits.', 'There are', and 'lose'?




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