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12-May-04/5:17 AM |
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You fail at everything that requires making a distinction between two fairly similar things. This poeme does not undo your failure.
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| Re: Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17 |
12-May-04/3:36 PM |
Dialysis Tone
After years of being renally refused*
I wish my kidney'd been transfused**
Fil'tring here all alone
I listen to the dialysis tone
lol
* refused a kidney transplant
** by which is meant, transplanted
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| Re: FINGER PIE by titan69 |
12-May-04/4:31 PM |
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I'm sorry but I don't vote on lewds -no vote-
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| Re: Consumer by nothingtoanyone |
12-May-04/4:36 PM |
"Thy who takes in, gets taken."
"Thy" means "your". You fail.
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| Re: As You Are by MacFrantic |
12-May-04/4:44 PM |
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| Re: Swan on Willow Lake by Caducus |
13-May-04/1:17 AM |
Stark and haunting words. The image of sailing "upon gold" is truly, sublimely inspired... this will perhaps remain with me for the rest of my life. Wonderful.
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13-May-04/1:19 AM |
Beautifully constructed. As usual, I cannot find a single fault with your work. Thank you.
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| Re: Prophets by unknown^user |
13-May-04/1:23 AM |
Witty, insightful. Perhaps one of the most important poemes written in the last 20 years.
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| Re: The Blood-Stained Body by Phalkon |
13-May-04/9:31 AM |
"ravaged by the loom"
Dear god -- this can only be the same loom from my poeme ''The Weaver's Curse''. Something must be done to stop this *warped* loomdividual's loompage before the situation *spindles* out of control!!!!!!1111111111
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13-May-04/5:07 PM |
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Would it be wrong if two Christians accidentally had sex before marriage? For instance, suppose the woman is lying nude on her bed, alone, and praying, and the man is in a room directly above, nude, lying face down on the floor with a harness around him and a bungee attached to his back. And then the floor boards give way and the man falls onto the woman repeatedly (because of the bungee) and the woman can't move because she is in the middle of a prayer and hasn't said "Amen" yet. Moreover, whilst the incident is totally out of their control, they still obtain sexual pleasure from the encounter because they can't help their natural instincts. Would that be wrong? Hmm?
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| Re: untitled: dedicated to my soldier/husband by SweetJuliet10 |
14-May-04/4:58 AM |
Thoughts (Free verse) by nicole081083
As I lie here in my bed
Many thoughts run through my head
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wait for sleep (Lyric) by xunitedx
i wait for sleep as i'm lying in my bed
but i can't stop these thoughts from running through my head
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Insomnia (Pimple) by BiggRobb
Every night that I lay down to bed,
I'm constantly bombarded with thoughts racing through my head;
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Adam's Apple (Lyric) by hotwire
Not enough words rush through my head
as I laid spend there in my bed
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Falling in Love (Free verse) by disturbedone182
I lie awake for hours upon my bed
While thoughts of her race through my head
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untitled: dedicated to my soldier/husband (Free verse) by SweetJuliet10
sitting here tonight alone in bed
a million things running through my head
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| Re: The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
14-May-04/5:19 AM |
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I declare it to be the most whimsical jape of the season!!! -6-
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| Re: A Valley Girl's Rendition of "Fire and Ice." by Enkidu |
14-May-04/5:24 AM |
Pure comedy gold!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"Like" -- ROFL TO THE MAX!
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| Re: Johnny Neurotic by Enkidu |
14-May-04/5:26 AM |
"Bill and Ted's: Enormously Mind-Numbing Adventure"
Where do you get all this great material from?!?!?!1
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| Re: A Valley Girl's Rendition of "Fire and Ice." by Enkidu |
14-May-04/7:06 AM |
I always thought this use of "like" came from Australia. Did it migrate there from California or vice versa? Or did they emerge independently?
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| Re: Jesus Creased by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
15-May-04/8:03 AM |
"Now tell me
what I want to hear,
until my face eats your face"
Ace.
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| Re: Gravity Rides by Jealousy |
15-May-04/11:24 AM |
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Why don't you just bust him out then, instead of writing prose with arbitrary line breaks about it?
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| Re: Bashing through the woods by INTRANSIT |
15-May-04/3:43 PM |
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| Re: Wanting To Much by Katrina |
18-May-04/2:50 AM |
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| Re: Fighting before bed by zodiac |
19-May-04/3:22 AM |
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