poemranker ::20 most recent comments by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. (261-280)

Comments by-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I., 261–280 back. Include replies

on some deleted poem 12 May 2004, 5:17 AM
You fail at everything that requires making a distinction between two fairly similar things. This poeme does not undo your failure.
on Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17 12 May 2004, 3:36 PM
Dialysis Tone

After years of being renally refused*
I wish my kidney'd been transfused**
Fil'tring here all alone
I listen to the dialysis tone

lol

* refused a kidney transplant
** by which is meant, transplanted
on FINGER PIE by titan69 12 May 2004, 4:31 PM
I'm sorry but I don't vote on lewds -no vote-
on Consumer by nothingtoanyone 12 May 2004, 4:36 PM
"Thy who takes in, gets taken."

"Thy" means "your". You fail.
on As You Are by MacFrantic 12 May 2004, 4:44 PM
[X] Self obsessed
on Swan on Willow Lake by Caducus 13 May 2004, 1:17 AM
Stark and haunting words. The image of sailing "upon gold" is truly, sublimely inspired... this will perhaps remain with me for the rest of my life. Wonderful.

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on some deleted poem 13 May 2004, 1:19 AM
Beautifully constructed. As usual, I cannot find a single fault with your work. Thank you.

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on Prophets by unknown^user 13 May 2004, 1:23 AM
Witty, insightful. Perhaps one of the most important poemes written in the last 20 years.

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on The Blood-Stained Body by Phalkon 13 May 2004, 9:31 AM
"ravaged by the loom"

Dear god -- this can only be the same loom from my poeme ''The Weaver's Curse''. Something must be done to stop this *warped* loomdividual's loompage before the situation *spindles* out of control!!!!!!1111111111
on some deleted poem 13 May 2004, 5:07 PM
Would it be wrong if two Christians accidentally had sex before marriage? For instance, suppose the woman is lying nude on her bed, alone, and praying, and the man is in a room directly above, nude, lying face down on the floor with a harness around him and a bungee attached to his back. And then the floor boards give way and the man falls onto the woman repeatedly (because of the bungee) and the woman can't move because she is in the middle of a prayer and hasn't said "Amen" yet. Moreover, whilst the incident is totally out of their control, they still obtain sexual pleasure from the encounter because they can't help their natural instincts. Would that be wrong? Hmm?
on untitled: dedicated to my soldier/husband by SweetJuliet10 14 May 2004, 4:58 AM
Thoughts (Free verse) by nicole081083

As I lie here in my bed
Many thoughts run through my head
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wait for sleep (Lyric) by xunitedx

i wait for sleep as i'm lying in my bed
but i can't stop these thoughts from running through my head
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Insomnia (Pimple) by BiggRobb

Every night that I lay down to bed,
I'm constantly bombarded with thoughts racing through my head;
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Adam's Apple (Lyric) by hotwire

Not enough words rush through my head
as I laid spend there in my bed
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Falling in Love (Free verse) by disturbedone182

I lie awake for hours upon my bed
While thoughts of her race through my head
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untitled: dedicated to my soldier/husband (Free verse) by SweetJuliet10

sitting here tonight alone in bed
a million things running through my head

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on The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 14 May 2004, 5:19 AM
I declare it to be the most whimsical jape of the season!!! -6-
on A Valley Girl's Rendition of "Fire and Ice." by Enkidu 14 May 2004, 5:24 AM
Pure comedy gold!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Like" -- ROFL TO THE MAX!
on Johnny Neurotic by Enkidu 14 May 2004, 5:26 AM
"Bill and Ted's: Enormously Mind-Numbing Adventure"

Where do you get all this great material from?!?!?!1
on A Valley Girl's Rendition of "Fire and Ice." by Enkidu 14 May 2004, 7:06 AM
I always thought this use of "like" came from Australia. Did it migrate there from California or vice versa? Or did they emerge independently?

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on Jesus Creased by <{Baba^Yaga}> 15 May 2004, 8:03 AM
"Now tell me
what I want to hear,
until my face eats your face"

Ace.
on Gravity Rides by Jealousy 15 May 2004, 11:24 AM
Why don't you just bust him out then, instead of writing prose with arbitrary line breaks about it?
on Bashing through the woods by INTRANSIT 15 May 2004, 3:43 PM
"how do animals know what is, and isn't, prey"

Because their prey is positively charged, while their stomachs are negatively charged.

http://www.alexchiu.com/cell/frame.html
on Wanting To Much by Katrina 18 May 2004, 2:50 AM
Wrong.

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on Fighting before bed by zodiac 19 May 2004, 3:22 AM
A