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A Valley Girl's Rendition of "Fire and Ice." (Free verse) by Enkidu
Some people are like, the world's gonna end, like, all fiery and stuff But other people think it's going to end in, like, another ice age, or something From my experiences with, like, both these things I'd rather go down in, like, a burning inferno, duh! But if, like, I had to die twice (That would suck...) I'm pretty sure I know enough, like, about hate and stuff To say that being cold can be really bad It would definitely work And it would probably, like, suffice, or something (Is that the right word?)

Up the ladder: I hope it hurts
Down the ladder: A Lovely Cog

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.4034123
Overall Rank: 3165
Posted: May 5, 2004 7:53 AM PDT; Last modified: May 5, 2004 7:53 AM PDT
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[9] deleted user @ 17.255.240.138 | 5-May-04/1:46 PM | Reply
Funny. hate is like cold - ok, maybe more like cold than its usual hot descriptor.
[6] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 14-May-04/5:24 AM | Reply
Pure comedy gold!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Like" -- ROFL TO THE MAX!
[n/a] Enkidu @ 204.98.23.2 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 14-May-04/6:43 AM | Reply
Thank you much and often
[6] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 212.219.223.8 | 14-May-04/7:06 AM | Reply
I always thought this use of "like" came from Australia. Did it migrate there from California or vice versa? Or did they emerge independently?

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