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At the door (Other) by fufuberry You swore you'd never leave me.
Your packed bags say otherwise.
I don't know what to believe any more,
The words on your lips
Or
The look in your eyes.
Up the ladder:
5 minute poem: section
Down the ladder:
I AM...
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Posted: May 14, 2004 2:49 AM PDT; Last modified: May 14, 2004 2:49 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.4034123 Overall Rank: 3165 Comments:
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ex0teric @ 24.10.241.104
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14-May-04/2:56 AM
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don't be sad. it's against the rules!
Brilliant so true 10
believe the packed bags, they are a fair hint.
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