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At the door (Other) by fufuberry
You swore you'd never leave me. Your packed bags say otherwise. I don't know what to believe any more, The words on your lips Or The look in your eyes.

Up the ladder: I'll Make It Through
Down the ladder: The Observer

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.4034123
Overall Rank: 3136
Posted: May 14, 2004 2:49 AM PDT; Last modified: May 14, 2004 2:49 AM PDT
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[7] ex0teric @ 24.10.241.104 | 14-May-04/2:56 AM | Reply
don't be sad. it's against the rules!
[10] titan69 @ 62.31.24.124 | 14-May-04/1:08 PM | Reply
Brilliant so true 10
[7] richa @ 81.178.254.233 | 15-May-04/6:03 AM | Reply
believe the packed bags, they are a fair hint.
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