regarding some deleted poem...	28-Apr-04/9:37 AM
The people upstairs are humping so hard it sounds like a timpani rehearsal.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Apr-04/2:03 AM
This old Daguerreotype of me was taken when I was very much younger, and before the accident, but it will suffice for your purposes. http://pix8.net/files/prbc_dark_angel.jpg
Re: saltwater bath by J.B. Manning	29-Apr-04/2:15 AM
DR E CARAWAX'S PROTOTYPE CHECKLISTE MARK II [X] Arbitrary indentation [X] Arbitrary linebreaks [X] Melodramatic [X] About romantic love [X] Protaganist is a bummer
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Apr-04/4:05 PM
You'd never fit all the arbitrary linebreaks onto the paper anyway.
Re: A Night-Croucher's Journey by Everyone	30-Apr-04/2:13 AM
A good try, but all poemes about escaped negroes must end with their capture. Any poeme that doesn't highlight the futility of trying to escape is only likely to rekindle that awful twinkle they get in their eyes when they think "I'm not a slave - I'm a human being". I once had to shoot a whole herd because of that.
Re: Superman VS. The Stairs by TanHand	30-Apr-04/10:55 AM
Here is a poster I made about disabled issues: http://www.pix8.net/files/stair_issues.jpg
Re: There Is No Such Thing As A Poem by Aetius	30-Apr-04/12:31 PM
Frankingsteins are much too thick to hold a pen.
Re: If I was a Child of a Perfect Union by w~* ATHENA *~w	1-May-04/4:31 AM
Oh yes, now I see -- our imperfections are what make us special, what make us human... what make us capable of love. You just keep telling yourself that, you second-rate failure.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-May-04/7:13 PM
So are you a student who was formerly a soldier which turned into a college, or formerly a student of soldiers which turn into colleges, or what?
Re: Black Belt by etherealmaiden	3-May-04/9:26 AM
I'd quite like it if you tightened the belt around your hands.
Re: Gothic by zodiac	3-May-04/3:14 PM
If you would just write some gruesome short stories, that would be 10 times more ace than this poetry fiddle-faddle.
Re: Where Have All the Punk Rockers Gone? by wilco	4-May-04/4:07 PM
LET'S SEE YOU DAAAAAANCE SUCKA YOU GOT NOTHIN ON ME
Re: California triolets by zodiac	7-May-04/7:26 AM
If she really was reading Lawrence, then "assurance" is bow'ls because you only chose it to rhyme with what she happened to be reading. But if she wasn't reading Lawrence, then the whole poeme is UTTERLY MORALLY BANKRUPT.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-May-04/11:12 AM
Wishy-washy fiddle-faddle. Obviously you think the more like portentous dialogue in a fantasy novel a poeme sounds, the better it is.
Re: The follies befalling an unfledged street poet. by SupremeDreamer	8-May-04/3:32 AM
Along with horus8, you seem to delight in the notion that you're constantly leaping forward poetically and spiritually, unaware that you've merely enrolled in yet another new school of guff. -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	8-May-04/3:37 AM
"We can’t be everyplace at once spinning satellites and planets like plates on poles - yet some try." O how true.
Re: Vodka kisses & the final sigh, v.II (bloody vodka remix) by SupremeDreamer	8-May-04/10:24 AM
Wipe that stupid smile off your bum-like face, hand your badge back to the commissioner, get the hell out of my office, and for Christ's sake put some clothes on :( -10-
Re: Ghosts by unknown^user	9-May-04/10:52 AM
I really love the unconventional way you've used commas in this piece!!!!
Re: Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	11-May-04/4:49 PM
hey guys stop being HATERS this is a great poeme because it comes from the heart and that's what really matters isn't it?/?? Sasha who are you to tell someone what to write about poetry is all about emotions and it doesn't matter what words you use if you're poeme hasn't got emotions then it isn't a poeme -10-
Re: Doe by OneFingerAnswer	12-May-04/3:00 AM
Great use of 'cried' to rhyme with 'side', but was her head really hung in defeat? I doubt it. You just needed her head to be hung in something that rhymed with 'feet'.