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~* ATHENA *~ is a recipient of the poemWanker award: If I was a Child of a Perfect Union (Free verse) by w~* ATHENA *~wfor appropriating other writers' work and otherwise plagiarising. Read with caution! If I was a child of a perfect union......
I would know all the answers.
I would sleep at night and not worry about where my next meal or novel
was coming from.
I would have perfect children too.
And we would all be extremely boring.
We would drive volvos trying to find the cheapest gas prices.
AND....
when we get old, we would remember to take out our teeth for cleaning.
cleaning
Up the ladder:
The Mandarin
Down the ladder:
Take-Off
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.4
Posted: April 30, 2004 9:15 PM PDT; Last modified: April 30, 2004 9:15 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.166884 Overall Rank: 5050 Comments:
I don't know why you have been flagged as a plagiarizer, don't want to know, and have not read any of your other poems, and don't know why Dark Angel is down on you; but then he's down on me too.
This poem is good! Except that if you were perfect, you wouldn't have to look for the cheapest gas. 201 view(s)
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You just keep telling yourself that, you second-rate failure.