poemranker ::If I was a Child of a Perfect Union by ~* ATHENA *~

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If I was a Child of a Perfect Union

by w~* ATHENA *~w

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Apr 2004 · 2 comments

If I was a child of a perfect union...... I would know all the answers. I would sleep at night and not worry about where my next meal or novel was coming from. I would have perfect children too. And we would all be extremely boring. We would drive volvos trying to find the cheapest gas prices. AND.... when we get old, we would remember to take out our teeth for cleaning. cleaning

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 1-May-04/4:31 AM Reply
Oh yes, now I see -- our imperfections are what make us special, what make us human... what make us capable of love.

You just keep telling yourself that, you second-rate failure.
[9] deleted user 1-May-04/10:04 AM Reply
I don't know why you have been flagged as a plagiarizer, don't want to know, and have not read any of your other poems, and don't know why Dark Angel is down on you; but then he's down on me too.

This poem is good! Except that if you were perfect, you wouldn't have to look for the cheapest gas.