Free verse № 100312
Where Have All the Punk Rockers Gone?
The best are kept at bay.
An inverted Darwinian orgy of sound.
Festering on the vines,
while the gods of old lose interest.
There's a change in the air.
Bordering on disturbing.
Clamoring for approval,
as a million records hit the floor.
It's getting very quiet in the world.
For the moment, at least.
Turn off the radio,
so that you can hear it too.
Can you hear it?
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-zodiac's ace band, The Brotherhood of the Righteous and Harmonious Fist
De-evolution? Good with punk; well said.
As for the rest, I wish you could make it flow a little smoother without creating a dichotomy between the punk rock sound and, well - smooth flow.
never explain a joke!
hear that everyone--i'm having creed's love child--and i'm only doing it to spite all the proper Xnrockers out there!!
i think i'll name it, Christal Laine Creed.
I hear Frank Black is worse than ever.
Well, my time went to quickly
I went lickety-splitly out to my old fifty-five
As I pulled away slowly, feelin' so holy,
God knows I was feelin' alive
And now the sun's comin' up
I'm ridin' with Lady Luck
Freeway cars and trucks
Stars beginning to fade, and I lead the parade
Just a wishin' I'd stayed a little longer
Lord, don't you know the feelin's gettin' stronger
Six in the morning, gave me no warnin'
I had to be on my way
Now the cars are all passin' me,
Trucks are all flashin' me
I'm headed home from your place
And now the sun's comin' up
I'm ridin' with Lady Luck
Freeway cars and trucks
(minus chorus and bridge)
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