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Where Have All the Punk Rockers Gone? (Free verse) by wilco

The best are kept at bay. An inverted Darwinian orgy of sound. Festering on the vines, while the gods of old lose interest. There's a change in the air. Bordering on disturbing. Clamoring for approval, as a million records hit the floor. It's getting very quiet in the world. For the moment, at least. Turn off the radio, so that you can hear it too. Can you hear it?

Shuushin 4-May-04/9:08 PM
Foundem:

Well, my time went to quickly
I went lickety-splitly out to my old fifty-five
As I pulled away slowly, feelin' so holy,
God knows I was feelin' alive
And now the sun's comin' up
I'm ridin' with Lady Luck
Freeway cars and trucks

Stars beginning to fade, and I lead the parade
Just a wishin' I'd stayed a little longer
Lord, don't you know the feelin's gettin' stronger

Six in the morning, gave me no warnin'
I had to be on my way
Now the cars are all passin' me,
Trucks are all flashin' me
I'm headed home from your place

And now the sun's comin' up
I'm ridin' with Lady Luck
Freeway cars and trucks

(minus chorus and bridge)




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