| Re: Poppy,diamond,s and twoo coward's by The_Third_Isis |
9-Dec-03/1:24 AM |
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SWEET ANGST. I LOVE YOUR REVENGE. 9
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| Re: Death & the Twisted Tree by SupremeDreamer |
10-Dec-03/7:56 PM |
it's a nice visual. an epic in black and white.
for some reason I see "night of the hunter" in
my mind when I read this with mitchem as the devil.
very nice. 8
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| Re: Pyrrhus smoked the sun by SupremeDreamer |
18-Dec-03/7:30 PM |
reminds me of camping at the beach.
I miss that . 9
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| Re: Amphetamine Witches & Scrabble by Bachus |
7-Jun-05/4:20 PM |
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I love this poem, rant. you have great sarcasm.
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| Re: Afraid of the dark. by darby pyn |
9-Jun-05/1:22 AM |
This poem sucks ass. it stutters, it slurs. vague hack writers piss me off.
stale malnourished weak shit thrown in every direction sticking to all
the unfortunate souls whoâs eyeâs are sacrificed for one wrong
turn. why me GOD. whhhyyyyy. WHO IS THIS FUCK.
oh......itâs me.
I have to quit drinking.
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9-Jun-05/1:46 AM |
Excellent. they. whoever they are. you know who you are.
want it so carefully painted with continuity and predictability
the ideal vision with no room for originality. poetry,
free form writing, whatever title is a preferred. is dreaming
with no boundaries. their are no rules. be entertaining and honest.
either would suffice.
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| Re: Emotionally Unavailable by horus8 |
13-Jun-05/2:08 PM |
you naked/ me vacum cleaner. priceless.
entertaining as usual. 8
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14-Jun-05/9:54 AM |
this conjured up images of St George slaying
the dragon. I don't know why. well done. 8
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| Re: Rise (incomplete) by Miracle |
21-Jun-05/9:35 AM |
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it's lacking something. maybe more detail?
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21-Jun-05/9:41 AM |
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The pace flows nicely. good read. 6
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| Re: The Object of the Game by Dovina |
28-Jun-05/11:33 AM |
well done.
this was very good. 8
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| Re: My Little Africa (edit) by Nuit |
2-Jul-05/12:07 AM |
I enjoyed this.
well done.
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| Re: Try Thinking Too by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk |
2-Jul-05/12:44 AM |
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| Re: Almost Persuaded by Dovina |
7-Jul-05/3:46 PM |
the title seems to imply it's about
someone persuading another into having sex.
it's ok.... but a little mechanical.
it needs more emotion.
just my opinion.
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| Re: Happy Charlene by Dovina |
11-Jul-05/3:53 PM |
nice positive emotions.
a good read.
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| Re: Let the Healing Begin by http://bandgeek |
16-Jul-05/10:29 AM |
well done.
very profound and vivid.
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| Re: Twilight on the Roadside by ALChemy |
22-Jul-05/10:41 AM |
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| Re: Worth by Dovina |
25-Jul-05/3:59 PM |
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I enjoyed this very much. 8
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| Re: After He Left by Dovina |
2-Aug-05/4:44 PM |
Nice work.
an honest description. 8
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| Re: untitled by AaronJKeating |
3-Aug-05/12:10 AM |
That was great.
so imaginative.
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