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Rise (incomplete) (Lyric) by Miracle Here I am
against my insecurities
i stumble and i struggle to come back
and when i try to realize whats gone is gone
its no suprise that everything i lost is what id had
alone i stand
alone i fall
against this rising current
I will sing my anthem at the top of my lungs
and maybe if you heed my call
you'll live your life and take it all
I never meant to hold you back angel
Up the ladder:
Eternal Sleep
Down the ladder:
all alone
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Posted: June 20, 2005 10:52 PM PDT; Last modified: June 22, 2005 1:16 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.762871 Overall Rank: 11477 Comments:
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Bankrupt_Word_Clerk @ 71.133.40.25
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20-Jun-05/10:57 PM
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and maybe the Texas sun can call you west, and the moon from Houston can call you home.
it's lacking something. maybe more detail?
I'm not sure you know exactly what you want to say.
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