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Rise (incomplete) (Lyric) by Miracle
Here I am against my insecurities i stumble and i struggle to come back and when i try to realize whats gone is gone its no suprise that everything i lost is what id had alone i stand alone i fall against this rising current I will sing my anthem at the top of my lungs and maybe if you heed my call you'll live your life and take it all I never meant to hold you back angel

Up the ladder: my love life
Down the ladder: this is tv

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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11467
Posted: June 20, 2005 10:52 PM PDT; Last modified: June 22, 2005 1:16 AM PDT
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[n/a] Bankrupt_Word_Clerk @ 71.133.40.25 | 20-Jun-05/10:57 PM | Reply
and maybe the Texas sun can call you west, and the moon from Houston can call you home.
[3] darby pyn @ 207.200.116.130 | 21-Jun-05/9:35 AM | Reply
it's lacking something. maybe more detail?
[3] Dovina @ 69.175.32.185 | 21-Jun-05/9:56 AM | Reply
I'm not sure you know exactly what you want to say.
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