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Rise (incomplete) (Lyric) by Miracle

Here I am against my insecurities i stumble and i struggle to come back and when i try to realize whats gone is gone its no suprise that everything i lost is what id had alone i stand alone i fall against this rising current I will sing my anthem at the top of my lungs and maybe if you heed my call you'll live your life and take it all I never meant to hold you back angel

darby pyn 21-Jun-05/9:35 AM
it's lacking something. maybe more detail?




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