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my love life (Other) by mystic enoch
me and love have never met and i feel that i will die with this debt to my mind i've been alone for so long that my heart has gotten worn from the damage my life has been so short the lies i tell support me it would satisfy my longing this emptiness that i feel to have my heart filled with love for someone that is real and i will nolonger need these delusions in my mind now its half past noon and my sun will set soon i hope that destiny will take me quietly from this life

Up the ladder: you
Down the ladder: Rise (incomplete)

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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11466
Posted: June 4, 2008 12:51 PM PDT; Last modified: June 4, 2008 12:51 PM PDT
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[0] SupremeDreamer @ 76.254.25.244 | 6-Jun-08/1:28 PM | Reply
Stop whimpering and LIVE. Go manifest destiny motherfucker. Who knows, it might inspire you to write something other than this dribble.

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