| Re: a comment on All are welcomed. by darby pyn |
5-Aug-05/9:26 PM |
Thank you Bethy.
always appreciated.
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| Re: a comment on Tangled web. by darby pyn |
5-Aug-05/9:47 AM |
Thank you very much Bethy.
: )
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| Re: a comment on Tangled web. by darby pyn |
3-Aug-05/10:31 AM |
Thank you so much for the spelling and technical points.
sometimes I just miss them.
this poem is about allot of things.
it's hard to explain, hence the poem.
I'm glad you liked the parts you did.
thank you again.
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| Re: untitled by AaronJKeating |
3-Aug-05/12:10 AM |
That was great.
so imaginative.
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| Re: a comment on More drugs. by darby pyn |
2-Aug-05/11:47 PM |
stepping back and looking at it I see your
point. I really like the last stanza but it
does'nt fit. I can't bring myself to change it though.
I don't know why. you make a valid point.
dam.
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| Re: After He Left by Dovina |
2-Aug-05/4:44 PM |
Nice work.
an honest description. 8
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| Re: a comment on More drugs. by darby pyn |
2-Aug-05/12:30 AM |
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| Re: a comment on More drugs. by darby pyn |
2-Aug-05/12:29 AM |
Thank you Penny.
I appreciate your concern.
it is from experience.
my mom is still alive.
I miss my uncle.
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| Re: a comment on A rhyme with no place to go. by darby pyn |
31-Jul-05/11:16 PM |
Thank you Lady poet.
I'm a musician so the line between songwriting
and poetry often cross.
thanks again.
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| Re: a comment on Hindsight by darby pyn |
27-Jul-05/10:31 AM |
I will.
thank you for the kind words.
much appreciation.
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| Re: a comment on Hindsight by darby pyn |
26-Jul-05/3:40 PM |
Thank you for reading.
I do strive to be better.
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| Re: a comment on The sunset sea. by darby pyn |
25-Jul-05/4:10 PM |
Always thank you for your criticism and praise.
I'm destined to be one of those writers who frustrates
the hell out of you. I always reread and revise my poems
before I post them. the words I use are in my grasp
otherwise I would'nt use them. when I was young if I came
across a word I did'nt know I looked it up.
so my vocabulary increased. to not use the words I know
would deny who I am.
and you are a great writer.
I always respond to your comments.
much love.
steve.
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| Re: a comment on Hindsight by darby pyn |
25-Jul-05/4:01 PM |
I get that allot. I'll try.
thanks for the input.
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| Re: Worth by Dovina |
25-Jul-05/3:59 PM |
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I enjoyed this very much. 8
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| Re: Twilight on the Roadside by ALChemy |
22-Jul-05/10:41 AM |
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| Re: a comment on The sunset sea. by darby pyn |
21-Jul-05/11:26 PM |
Thank you Nuit.
I am glad you enjoyed it.
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| Re: a comment on The sunset sea. by darby pyn |
21-Jul-05/11:25 PM |
BWC it's cool if you don't wan't to vote.
but is it a good tired or bad tired?
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| Re: Let the Healing Begin by http://bandgeek |
16-Jul-05/10:29 AM |
well done.
very profound and vivid.
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| Re: a comment on Birth, school, work and death. by darby pyn |
15-Jul-05/10:43 PM |
I'll put stsnza's next time.
thank you bandgeek.
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| Re: a comment on Birth, school, work and death. by darby pyn |
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