| Re: Self-Rebellion, revised by emilyowey |
8-Sep-02/4:14 PM |
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great energy. you use your disapointment well.
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| Re: The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog |
8-Sep-02/6:41 PM |
and you call sweat shit.
what are you 10.
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8-Sep-02/10:41 PM |
reminds me of L.A. in the late
70's which is the idea I think
of a good poem. to evoke forgoten
memories.
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8-Sep-02/11:59 PM |
it's funny because it's true.
brilliant.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
9-Sep-02/12:01 AM |
it's funny because it's true.
brilliant.
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| Re: Musings from the LTD by w~* ATHENA *~w |
19-Sep-02/1:00 AM |
I let loose a night's worth of drinking on the neck and hair of
an unsuspecting girl at a Green Day
show and slowly left before she
noticed. your poem brings all that
back. thank you. should loose read the news and end on "paid my dues".
still nice. 8
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19-Oct-02/2:07 AM |
This poem reminds me so much
of a song called " Richard" by the
Geraldine Fibbers off the album
Lost somwhere between the earth
and home. if you have not heard it
you definitely should. thank
you again for sharing your voice
with me I loved the music accompaniment. it felt like romantic desperation. very nice.
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19-Oct-02/2:16 AM |
well done. nice feel of vanity
and denial in the face of adversity.
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19-Oct-02/11:21 AM |
definitely has potential. should
continue starting from "poor".
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19-Oct-02/4:37 PM |
You're going to make me learn
latin aren't you.
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| Re: From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford |
23-Oct-02/12:00 PM |
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23-Oct-02/7:26 PM |
Their is a very warm and kind
feel to this poem. very good. 8
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| Re: In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~> |
28-Oct-02/11:25 PM |
You just wrote a great melodic
punk song. I got the guitar down
perfect for this.
you should call it "love and war"
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| Re: In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~> |
28-Oct-02/11:27 PM |
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| Re: would i be considered crazy by silvertongueddevil |
7-Jan-03/2:14 AM |
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7-Jan-03/2:30 AM |
I miss your work.
your writing has the heart and soul
of experience with adult angst.
when emotion evolves to action.
and looses its young apathy.
you're such a treasure.
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14-Jan-03/11:57 AM |
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you realy are a mad genius.
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