| Re: orange crumble by impert&ent |
3-Sep-05/10:03 PM |
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i can imagine this wall, i think i pass it often
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| Re: Stranger by MacFrantic |
3-Sep-05/10:33 PM |
when does he find time to get new fish?
i gave an eight just because that last part didn't flow to me
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| Re: Lessons(revised) by bellafuego |
4-Sep-05/12:26 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
4-Sep-05/12:35 PM |
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i usually just throw those ones out, but now may consider alternate action
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| Re: Drinking Knowledge by gregsamsa222 |
4-Sep-05/9:19 PM |
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sculptuing and drawing go very well with tea, but i would agree with the ethics bit
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| Re: My Dad's Armchair. by Bethy |
5-Sep-05/7:19 AM |
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i had the gd fortune to own one of my grandfather's old armchairs, it was the best place to be. simple things are good for writing and reading
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| Re: The Right Thing To Do by Bethy |
5-Sep-05/7:25 AM |
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that was probably the right thing to do. definitely not the adventurous thing, but probably the right thing. the length of it suits the situation, but i am curious as to what was said for hours on end...
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| Re: this dude is the best by ay deee |
5-Sep-05/7:46 AM |
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thank you bethy; i dont know why your comment was deleted, but yes we all know this dude, and may be a bit like him at times...
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| Re: self-observation in a chatroom with lack of sleep by nentwined |
5-Sep-05/7:54 AM |
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monkey is my cheese!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Re: 575 by nentwined |
5-Sep-05/7:59 AM |
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| Re: fire has its own logic by impert&ent |
5-Sep-05/8:03 AM |
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many a night spent in the good company of fire and beer. bring your friends next time, too. i liked june 11 and quarter past ten in the midst of timeless reflections such as these.
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| Re: i was an ass by hendrimike |
9-Sep-05/1:00 PM |
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| Re: Keep Your Mouth Shut and Your Gun Loaded by wilco |
12-Sep-05/9:36 PM |
i like a short verse, but i don't know...
"makes" and "i'll have" make it a little off.
but i'm no stickler for grammar.
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| Re: My addict by Heather Dee |
12-Sep-05/9:41 PM |
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i liked the first two stanzas better than the rest
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| Re: The Death of an Octopus by tianyi |
16-Sep-05/9:34 AM |
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| Re: No Aegis by wilco |
2-Oct-05/8:54 PM |
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i can see gulls becoming bored with corpses, but i don't see the devils here.
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| Re: A Shortcut to Summer by Enkidu |
4-Jan-06/11:28 AM |
whilst all the pretty knives...
is a sweet line
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| Re: Half of All My Lies are True by Enkidu |
4-Jan-06/11:30 AM |
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quite confused, and not connvinced by the rhymes
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
4-Jan-06/11:42 AM |
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would have to agree about the pairing of adjecives. the last block containing the real message of the peice seems a bit too literal an explaination of your idea compared to descriptions in the first two. i despise the words "this society;" consider perhaps culture, age group, income level. you use such colorful words in the rest of the poem compared to "this society."
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| Re: Where the Hell Did I Put My Glasses? by Joe-joe |
17-Jan-06/3:35 PM |
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a fantastic collection of images....
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