Re: Martyr by kawakurdi	30-Oct-02/7:56 PM
'Satan pooh-poohed' is dreadful in this context.
Re: God's Gift by Mutant_X	30-Oct-02/8:03 PM
I might have actually bothered to read this if there was a hint of correct spelling somewhere in it.
Re: I hate people by Bazilla	30-Oct-02/8:08 PM
Please tell me this is meant to be a funny poem. I gave you a high mark on the assumption it's meant to be this funny. If it wasn't, I'll have to bring down my vote by a lot.
Re: Fall from Love's Grace by loneshadow29	30-Oct-02/8:09 PM
No quoting Shakespeare at the end of poems, it makes you look like a child trying to appear intellectual.
Re: DID YOU EVER? by emrldeyz79	30-Oct-02/8:10 PM
Stop shouting. Please. My ears hurt.
Re: Cheap Thrills by Owner of the Sky	30-Oct-02/8:12 PM
No, I'd say he'S a pretty expensive one. You have to die to meet him, after all. Or take acid.
Re: Eternal Sleep by Artificial_Sweetner	30-Oct-02/8:41 PM
Die then, damn you! Die! Why is it taking you so long? Don't you even know how to tie a proper noose?
Re: What if ? by heroditus	30-Oct-02/8:42 PM
Then there is no point in your writing poetry.
Re: Liberty bells & Disney Land by horus8	30-Oct-02/8:49 PM
I'm sure. Did you know that poppycock is derived from the Dutch papecack, which means 'soft dung'? I wonder how many nice proper little old ladies swearing sweetly are aware of that.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Oct-02/8:50 PM
'As butterflies with nascent cyclones/Tucked within their wings' is wonderful.
Re: I can't write by Mutant_X	30-Oct-02/8:51 PM
Nope. You can't write.
Re: Little wishing well by gadget	30-Oct-02/8:52 PM
Resignation will get you nowhere, dearie.
Re: Avetis by KilIluminati	30-Oct-02/9:00 PM
Either you're illiterate; or English is not your first language, but your third or fourth; or you are trying to convince us that you cannot talk or write. If the latter, you have succeeded. Congratulations.
Re: A little song by kawakurdi	30-Oct-02/9:02 PM
Awww...
Re: The Cross Foxes by Gwyrfab	30-Oct-02/9:07 PM
Wonderful. Wish I had been there. I just wish you bally Welsh could come up with a way of writing your damn words so that other people could figure out how to say them...
Re: untitled by skinda	31-Oct-02/7:00 PM
'Don't make me angry/I'll only get mad'? Sheer idiocy. Of course you'll get mad if they make you angry. Stop repeating yourself.
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Oct-02/7:03 PM
So wise. Have you written a single poem that doesn'T inform us that you know what life's all about? You're some sort of guru. Teach me. Please.
Re: missing u by wrabo	31-Oct-02/9:46 PM
Yep. It's teenage angst all right. If you've left those days, why on earth inflict them on us?
Re: PainFul Of LiFe by PoEt MaStEr	31-Oct-02/9:51 PM
Why couldn't you? I doubt anyone cares in this case.
Re: Cold Set by feathers68	5-Nov-02/11:25 AM
Wow! You crept under covers! That's so exciting! And energetic! And in need of an exclamation mark! Really!