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Free verse № 16269

missing u

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Sep 2002 · 2 comments

Oldie from my teenage angst days not good enough haven't you heard not special enough don't stare plz it's hurts i'm sitting alone singing quietly the world keeps on moving but not affecting me nothin special here keep on your merry way please don't feel sorry and ask if i'm ok cause you don't give a shit all you do is whine the only thing you want to hear me say is yea i'm ok i'll be just fine yup i'm prefectly FINE Fucked up from your twisted use Insecure from your careless abuse Neurotic from your warped mind games Emotional left w/all this pain

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[0] Tintagiles 31-Oct-02/9:46 PM Reply
Yep. It's teenage angst all right. If you've left those days, why on earth inflict them on us?
[10] daveslady 4-Mar-04/12:20 AM Reply
wow, very powerful. caught the emotion great.