regarding some deleted poem...	5-Nov-02/12:17 PM
As someone quite heathen, I wish to vehemently protest the discrimination and political uncorrectnes of the fifth line. And I probably could put a price on your words, sir.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Nov-02/11:30 AM
Sometimes, girls, I'm glad I'm in a different town.
Re: Head-on Collision (True story) by t_t_redhot	5-Nov-02/11:45 AM
The ladies have said it all. 'So I have move on'? What?
Re: HATE by Blade	5-Nov-02/11:50 AM
This actually made me laugh out loud. Congratulations. If I thought you meant it to, I'd give you a ten.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Nov-02/12:12 PM
This reminds me of some of Guillevic's poetry (one of my favourite French poets, died in 1997). Just in the structure. But why the title?
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Nov-02/12:10 PM
Yeeshus.
Re: ... by logun2002ya	6-Nov-02/6:09 AM
'You are my vision/of perfect sweet'... You ARE an imbecile.
Re: Music by oohv	5-Nov-02/7:11 PM
Cut it up so that it's readable and I'll consider reading it.
Re: rules by roses are read	5-Nov-02/7:43 PM
Are those actually line breaks or is it a prose poem? I can't quite tell.
Re: Bedside Angel by feathers68	5-Nov-02/11:42 AM
Gadzooks. The badness. It's almost palpable.
Re: OUR FUTURE? by kliq	5-Nov-02/12:21 PM
Babies are made, but they still burn, dearie. Easily.
Re: I Love You, My Angel by mytenderrage	5-Nov-02/11:46 AM
'Your arms wrap around my FIGURE'? Even by the standards of pimple poetry, that's bad.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Nov-02/11:48 AM
If you must write a bad limerick, could you at least make the second line fit the rhythm?
Re: untitled2 by PunchMeInTheFace	5-Nov-02/12:09 PM
Congratulations. You make me WANT to punch you in the face. Bravo for this piece, which is a magnificent work for getting others to fulfil your desire to get a broken nose. It actually looks as though it might be good. But cut it up, fer gawd's sake, cut it up!
Re: Creep into my heart by mozac	5-Nov-02/11:43 AM
When drums are rolling, they have no beat. It's a single wave of sound.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Nov-02/11:30 AM
This is terrible. Limonade, you're far too kind some times. Hmm, is 'truelly' there for 'truly' or for 'cruelly', I wonder.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Nov-02/11:33 AM
I know it's ridiculous to hope for an explanation, but why the capital letters and quotation marks for the last word? Is your heart not real? Is it standing in for something else? Actually, you could go somewhere with the quotation marks around 'heart'. Though I find the rest a bit hopeless. Ah well. I'm just a bastard at heart, I guess.
Re: Alien by Mutant_X	5-Nov-02/11:39 AM
You're 'stock on earth'? Yum. Are you better with noodles or with rice?
Re: untitled by bluwiz	5-Nov-02/12:00 PM
I can't help it. The first lines are far too redolent of Shakespeare's 'Timon of Athens' for me.
Re: you are my concert by snacktime	5-Nov-02/12:06 PM
Bravo for knowing how to use musical imagery. Even more bravo for knowing how to use the word 'crescendo'.