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Creep into my heart (Free verse) by mozac
Creep into my heart This mystical whisper of the swaying beat of rolling drums Is this my heart beating My eyes seeing am I the sea or a single wave perhaps a single drop in my heart I am moving to the sound of your eyes the movement of the eyebrows frozen in a moment of time in an etched memory confusion delusion an unbeating heart vibrating strings of an old instrument tighten loosen turn and twist My hands on my eyes so I could not see what my eyes hear in myself I must see within myself

Up the ladder: In the Way
Down the ladder: you

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.4
Weighted score: 4.6900725
Overall Rank: 12053
Posted: November 3, 2002 12:37 PM PST; Last modified: November 3, 2002 12:37 PM PST
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[1] Tintagiles @ 198.164.238.88 | 5-Nov-02/11:43 AM | Reply
When drums are rolling, they have no beat. It's a single wave of sound.
[9] deleted user @ 208.28.223.74 | 29-Jan-04/9:55 AM | Reply
i think this poem is pretty....
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