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Creep into my heart (Free verse) by mozac
Creep into my heart
This mystical whisper
of the swaying beat
of rolling drums
Is this my heart beating
My eyes seeing
am I the sea
or a single wave
perhaps a single drop
in my heart
I am moving
to the sound of your eyes
the movement of the eyebrows
frozen
in a moment of time
in an etched memory
confusion
delusion
an unbeating heart
vibrating strings
of an old instrument
tighten
loosen
turn
and twist
My hands
on my eyes
so I could not see
what my eyes hear
in myself
I must see
within myself
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Weighted score: 4.6900725
Overall Rank: 12058
Posted: November 3, 2002 12:37 PM PST; Last modified: November 3, 2002 12:37 PM PST
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