Creep into my heart

Member since 2001 · Posted 3 Nov 2002 · 2 comments

Creep into my heart This mystical whisper of the swaying beat of rolling drums Is this my heart beating My eyes seeing am I the sea or a single wave perhaps a single drop in my heart I am moving to the sound of your eyes the movement of the eyebrows frozen in a moment of time in an etched memory confusion delusion an unbeating heart vibrating strings of an old instrument tighten loosen turn and twist My hands on my eyes so I could not see what my eyes hear in myself I must see within myself

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[1] Tintagiles 5-Nov-02/11:43 AM Reply

When drums are rolling, they have no beat. It's a single wave of sound.

[9] deleted user 29-Jan-04/9:55 AM Reply

i think this poem is pretty....