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you (Free verse) by diamondeyez
what good is my world without you what good is my world without one like you i said that i loved you, you said the same yet, were our translations different does, once love mean always love will you be there to help me through when i need someone around like you what good is life without you what good is life without one like you heartbreak isnt what i need but, it seems to be all that you bring once good, not always good it wouldnt be the same without you love, mistrusted t on who should have deserved my love undeniable to you what good is MY world without you what good is MY world without one like you ~Anonymous

Up the ladder: Creep into my heart
Down the ladder: guitar music and lies

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.4
Weighted score: 4.6900725
Overall Rank: 12054
Posted: November 27, 2002 11:32 PM PST; Last modified: November 27, 2002 11:32 PM PST
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[5] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 28-Nov-02/1:51 AM | Reply
Try coming from a different angle when writing of love, love is indefinable, everyone has different defintions, delve deep whats yours? let me taste from your creative cauldron
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