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~* ATHENA *~ is a recipient of the poemWanker award:
for appropriating other writers' work and otherwise plagiarising.
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Free verse № 31640

guitar music and lies

by w~* ATHENA *~w

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Dec 2002 · 8 comments

i told someone i had a girl i told her she was my girl when would i tell her I had other girls oh, and other men to feed the child that i fathered. where does the line who makes the design? is there a sign

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8 comments

[2] SP REYNOLDS 24-Dec-02/1:04 PM Reply

...You'll be fine
Does this rhyme?

[n/a] poetandknowit › SP REYNOLDS 24-Dec-02/1:56 PM Reply

Must you vote on the work of a plagiarist?

[n/a] <~> › poetandknowit 24-Dec-02/5:42 PM Reply

can't find this one. not yet, anyway. tick tick tick

[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> › <~> 24-Dec-02/6:29 PM Reply

you can't find it because it's not stolen. it's aimed right at my forehead like a brick. see.

[n/a] <~> › <{Baba^Yaga}> 24-Dec-02/6:42 PM Reply

good thing you're quick. ouch.

[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> › SP REYNOLDS 24-Dec-02/6:31 PM Reply

shawn, this was the chick who stayed in the guest house for a bit, remember. right before you came back out here from new england..remember the bruno story? ahhhh.see. told you.

[4] brazen 24-Dec-02/10:04 PM Reply

this sounds like a monday at the playboy mansion

[6] wOrnella Mutiw 25-Dec-02/12:51 AM Reply

Hmmmmm...I gather our lolipop is a womanizer and a jiggalo...you sound angry...6