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untitled (Lyric) by skinda Sadness and depression
is all I have inside
i just wanna go
faraway and hide
My anger is building
up inside of me
I'm gonna explode
so just let me be
Don't make me angry
I'll only get mad
Please leave me alone
before it gets bad
For those who care
what I have to say
just understand me
and please go away
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Posted: October 31, 2002 4:16 PM PST; Last modified: October 31, 2002 4:16 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.4284997 Overall Rank: 12932 Comments:
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31-Oct-02/7:00 PM
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'Don't make me angry/I'll only get mad'? Sheer idiocy. Of course you'll get mad if they make you angry. Stop repeating yourself.
Actually, I think 'Don't make me angry / I'll only get mad' is the best part of this poem. Cut away the rest and leave those two lines.
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