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untitled (Lyric) by skinda

Sadness and depression is all I have inside i just wanna go faraway and hide My anger is building up inside of me I'm gonna explode so just let me be Don't make me angry I'll only get mad Please leave me alone before it gets bad For those who care what I have to say just understand me and please go away

Nicholas Jones 1-Nov-02/1:54 AM
Actually, I think 'Don't make me angry / I'll only get mad' is the best part of this poem. Cut away the rest and leave those two lines.




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