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A little song (Free verse) by kawakurdi
When she gets angry I turn into waves and get lost in the sea When she gets gloomy I turn into a wind and cuddle her like a tree When she smiles to me I turn into a bird and fly afar to get her a star and keep her for ever happy.

Up the ladder: Northern Ireland
Down the ladder: Friendship

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.625
Weighted score: 5.1680884
Overall Rank: 4971
Posted: September 18, 2002 5:01 PM PDT; Last modified: September 18, 2002 5:01 PM PDT
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Comments:
[10] jonnyduk @ 194.130.104.2 | 19-Sep-02/4:11 AM | Reply
well cute (don't tell ne1 im a boy)
[4] Tintagiles @ 142.166.239.207 | 30-Oct-02/9:02 PM | Reply
Awww...
[n/a] royalflesh @ 67.122.6.26 | 30-Oct-02/11:37 PM | Reply
u sir, make human-stuffy afraid. watch your back and balls next time you step up to the urinal. pillow. please.
[7] Quarton @ 12.217.212.111 | 19-Jan-03/6:56 AM | Reply
Not bad. Short and sweet. Typo in last line. For ever should be forever.
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