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A little song (Free verse) by kawakurdi When she gets angry
I turn into waves
and get lost in the sea
When she gets gloomy
I turn into a wind
and cuddle her like a tree
When she smiles to me
I turn into a bird
and fly afar
to get her a star
and keep her for ever happy.
Up the ladder:
Northern Ireland
Down the ladder:
Friendship
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Posted: September 18, 2002 5:01 PM PDT; Last modified: September 18, 2002 5:01 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.1680884 Overall Rank: 4972 Comments:
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jonnyduk @ 194.130.104.2
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19-Sep-02/4:11 AM
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well cute (don't tell ne1 im a boy)
Awww...
u sir, make human-stuffy afraid. watch your back and balls next time you step up to the urinal. pillow. please.
Not bad. Short and sweet. Typo in last line. For ever should be forever.
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