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A little song
(
Free verse
) by
kawakurdi
When she gets angry I turn into waves and get lost in the sea When she gets gloomy I turn into a wind and cuddle her like a tree When she smiles to me I turn into a bird and fly afar to get her a star and keep her for ever happy.
Quarton
19-Jan-03/6:56 AM
Not bad. Short and sweet. Typo in last line. For ever should be forever.
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