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Free verse № 10252

Northern Ireland

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Aug 2002 · 3 comments

Blood stained houses invade your night, A Hungry sniper waits out of sight, Your every movement is closely observed, Footsteps the only sound to be heard. Thoughts of your wife feeds on the silence, Your reason to survive in this hole of violence. Moving cautiously through streets grey and bare, A 'CRACK' splits open the damp dark air. Dreams of children shatter as you fall to the ground, You never even saw him fire the round. Another victory in his war of fear, A loss to those far away held dear, A political victim at religion's hand, Whose only wish was an end to this slaughter of man.

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[8] Dreamer 21-Aug-02/3:55 AM Reply
I really like this poem. You portray the situation brilliantly and also the frustration at not being able to conceive such inhumanity. See "The Curse". It is along the same lines, sort of!
[10] ShaNoN+960317485 20-Nov-03/6:34 AM Reply
i see a bitter man, as i read between these lines:o( - but i liked it
[9] Fearlesfan_04 24-Feb-05/6:53 PM Reply
Exciting!!!!