| Re: Wintergreen by D. $ Fontera |
5-Jan-05/1:47 PM |
ohh this is so beautiful
i love the imagery
and it flows so gracefully
Great Job!
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| Re: a comment on California triolets by zodiac |
4-Jan-05/6:21 AM |
well at least you have a plan . . .
(it is nice to prepared i suppose)
on a more serious note, since i am supposing e.e. cummings is not your most favorite of poets, who may i ask is? (i am genuinely curious, as i am on a mission to read the best that poetry has to offer)
-mega
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| Re: america The Beautiful by Stacy Stewart |
3-Jan-05/9:40 AM |
nice . . . (i gave it an 8)
-mega
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| Re: a comment on California triolets by zodiac |
3-Jan-05/9:32 AM |
oh my that is extremely difficult . . . like choosing a favorite sonnet by shakespeare . . . i do not know there are so many gems in his writings, i could send you a list of favorite poems perhaps . . .
i suppose if i had to choose, the last two lines, of this one poem, (this title is not coming to mind as of current) go:
"i'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach 1000 stars how not to dance"
but all in all, i love a great deal of his work . . .
-mega
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| Re: Religious Slaughter by Beyond_Dreams |
3-Jan-05/9:28 AM |
i like this . . . u creat vivid images
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| Re: all in one day by peaceseeker |
30-Dec-04/8:59 PM |
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im not quite sure what to make of this - but i really really like it - 10!
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| Re: Thommmn Thrrremmn by fatmansinging |
30-Dec-04/1:20 PM |
you are without a shadow of a doubt the worst poet i have ever heard of - i am honestly not trying to be mean - i am sure you are good at something - it just isnt poetry - please try your hand at something else
-mega
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| Re: Thoughts Controlled by a Slow Server by <Wankster> |
30-Dec-04/12:27 PM |
this is so unique and it is so well written i lovet this
-mega
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| Re: A Better God by Dovina |
30-Dec-04/12:19 PM |
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this is beautifully written - i love it
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| Re: Possession by Acid_moose |
29-Dec-04/10:51 PM |
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| Re: a comment on California triolets by zodiac |
29-Dec-04/10:11 PM |
i really have absolutely nothing to do with this conversation, but i would just like to interject that e.e.cummings is among the greatest poets that ever lived, and he didnt randomly make up words, if you actually examine his work, you will find a purpose for each and every word he made and rule (grammar-wise) he broke
not meaning to sound harsh - but i just thought i would make my opinion known
(i am aware that noone cares, however, so no need to tell me)
-mega
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| Re: California triolets by zodiac |
29-Dec-04/10:08 PM |
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i love the imagrey in your work
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| Re: Fighting before bed by zodiac |
29-Dec-04/10:05 PM |
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| Re: (Come find me) by zodiac |
29-Dec-04/10:02 PM |
wow - i love this
truly great work - one of the best ive seen
like the rhyme scheme
- i give it a 10 -
~mega
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| Re: Twin Forks by auscot |
29-Dec-04/9:59 PM |
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great work - love the imagrey - perfect 10.0
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| Re: The Arms of Your Man by peaceseeker |
27-Dec-04/10:53 PM |
u capture part of humanity
well done
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| Re: you turned me evil by baphomet |
27-Dec-04/10:37 PM |
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