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The Arms of Your Man (Free verse) by peaceseeker
you said, "well, we are only mortal" eyes knowingly lowered and averted to my level, this level we were on this place I didn't belong but I love your man, said my eyes blurred at the sight of you so sharp your point of view paralyzed in fear and anger with integrity, I bared my soul my sister, I love you so much more who stays with a rolling stone anyway? my role so sad as he rolls down betrayal with commitment as your top card the ring, the mortgage, the puppy he dangles for you like a carrot then mixes my tainted medicine a crystal rock, its edges sharp good intentions were its message smiled high, wrists back, arms extended into the arms of your man, encircling me.

Down the ladder: Mice

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.1666665
Weighted score: 5.5827065
Overall Rank: 2344
Posted: November 8, 2003 3:09 PM PST; Last modified: November 8, 2003 3:09 PM PST
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[10] dancin_n_da_moonlite @ 152.163.100.135 | 27-Dec-04/10:53 PM | Reply
u capture part of humanity
well done
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