poemranker ::The Arms of Your Man by peaceseeker

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Free verse № 74158

The Arms of Your Man

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Nov 2003 · 1 comment

you said, "well, we are only mortal" eyes knowingly lowered and averted to my level, this level we were on this place I didn't belong but I love your man, said my eyes blurred at the sight of you so sharp your point of view paralyzed in fear and anger with integrity, I bared my soul my sister, I love you so much more who stays with a rolling stone anyway? my role so sad as he rolls down betrayal with commitment as your top card the ring, the mortgage, the puppy he dangles for you like a carrot then mixes my tainted medicine a crystal rock, its edges sharp good intentions were its message smiled high, wrists back, arms extended into the arms of your man, encircling me.

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[10] dancin_n_da_moonlite 27-Dec-04/10:53 PM Reply
u capture part of humanity
well done