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Wintergreen (Free verse) by D. $ Fontera Traces of autumn 'cross my being
Cradled 'neath the void
Oh, darting breath
So quick to escape
To drift among the zephyrs
To be liberated
Snowfall dresses the trees
Draped in powder
Frosted with white lace
In leave of the grateful darkeness
Sunbeams caress her face
Forever smiling
Up the ladder:
Paradise
Down the ladder:
Dirty Heaven
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Posted: January 4, 2005 8:32 PM PST; Last modified: January 4, 2005 8:32 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7942 Comments:
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i love the imagery
and it flows so gracefully
Great Job!