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you turned me evil (Free verse) by baphomet you made me evil
but thats all right
i lay out white ribbins every night
limited supply, crack heads gotta fight
now i aint no squire
im the king of the liars
from E's to zanees
slingin coke and trees
i know where my lifes goin to lead
i just hope it doesnt end up like
"requiem for a dream"
mind tricks
mind tricks, its moms gift
so i guess i learn quick
i have'nt asked ma for a thing
make my own cash, i aint under her wing
i make breezees do tricks for me
not the other way around i aint no pantie
any ways you cut your hella short
why?
im still gonna be an artist
im goin to get an apartment in
new york.
one day we can talk
i didnt leave because of you i left because of ma.
Up the ladder:
Brush me away
Down the ladder:
The Obelisk
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Posted: December 27, 2004 3:37 PM PST; Last modified: December 27, 2004 3:37 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.2384057 Overall Rank: 4067 Comments:
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dancin_n_da_moonlite @ 152.163.100.135
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27-Dec-04/10:37 PM
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nice
enjoyed it.. 10
Lol, New York is a mighty place.
You should fit in just fine.
I miss you Brandon, and I love you.
I think you will be good at what ever You decide you'd like to be good at. I'd wish you a merry christmas, and say some stupid shit about life and love, and how things work, but I think you and I know better than that, and I also think we know eachother's minds, I am fine, the kids are great. you are an Uncle again to a beautiful Boy his name is Cyrus, maybe magic Like you and I, or maybe not. We'll see, I wrote a book, it was published. I finaly got a commercial, so a bit of money. I pray you are well, but I know you would tell me if you weren't. Sorry about mom, And I, but I've decided that she hurts my mind to much to be around, and because I'm A man, I can do that, she is a tsunami her aftermath disgusts even men of god. but you are a prince, and I am your brother Older, I might add, Our love is from the stars. We must always keep counsel.
Not bad!
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