| Re: On the Occasion by tadpole |
13-Mar-05/1:40 PM |
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| Re: "America The Beautiful" by jroday |
16-Mar-05/3:00 PM |
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idealism is nice - but will it put bread on the tables of all these people u discuss?
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16-Mar-05/5:45 PM |
unlikely though that would be intersting (last verse) nice though i really like this
-megan
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| Re: Love Greased by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
16-Mar-05/5:48 PM |
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well endowed lie? that is something I don't hear often......
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16-Mar-05/5:49 PM |
not to be ruede but your rudamentary rhyming turns me off immediatley...............
-megan
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16-Mar-05/5:50 PM |
i really like this
[cept for the republican part..:)]
-megan
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| Re: Nicholas Martin by horus8 |
16-Mar-05/5:51 PM |
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never knew him - now i cant -
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| Re: Out Doubt! by wlshepherd |
16-Mar-05/5:53 PM |
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large word cant save a poem - 5
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| Re: A good little poem by INTRANSIT |
30-Mar-05/2:39 PM |
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i like this (though i dont eat pickles).......
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| Re: Follow by unknown |
30-Mar-05/2:41 PM |
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i dont really like this and it reminds me slightly of the clown in the movie version of it (stephen king)
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| Re: The Universe by durr_T_hip_E |
2-Apr-05/10:06 AM |
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not to bad actually, but it could use some work for sure, perhaps if you left the one word per line format, and it into like a tanka or haiku or something it would sound better
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| Re: The Joynt by durr_T_hip_E |
2-Apr-05/10:08 AM |
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interesting to say the least
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| Re: criminal by durr_T_hip_E |
2-Apr-05/10:10 AM |
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it sounds nice but thats all it does, a word to the wise: don't try to build a hidden "meaning" when it isn't there, either be tricky or be straight forward but dont have nothing
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| Re: You Pick It by durr_T_hip_E |
2-Apr-05/10:29 AM |
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i agree with dovina it was good but at the end the poem died right along with the kid - 7 for an other wise nice work
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| Re: Amsterdam One by durr_T_hip_E |
2-Apr-05/10:30 AM |
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not my style but its sounds nice
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| Re: All About Me by chocolate9009 |
2-Apr-05/10:43 AM |
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| Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222 |
2-Apr-05/10:51 AM |
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this is one of the most beautiful things i have ever read, and the way it just kept me going from one part to the next is amazing, i usually dont like things this long but this is beauitufl
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| Re: A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus |
2-Apr-05/11:03 AM |
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| Re: Into My World by sliver |
2-Apr-05/11:11 AM |
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