The Universe

by durr_T_hip_E

Member since 2005 · Posted 22 Mar 2005 · 6 comments

stabbing all love infinitely unites heartbeats raging silence perfectly balanced

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6 comments

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Mar-05/3:54 PM Reply

This looks like the output of an angsty Markov chain generator. Stop writing.

[n/a] edpeterson 23-Mar-05/8:15 AM Reply

sausage
salami
juice
cointreau
salsa
peas
jenny jones

[1] Stephen Robins 23-Mar-05/8:33 AM Reply

Awesome - put the word shit in front of every word and you have it.

[n/a] durr_T_hip_E › Stephen Robins 23-Mar-05/12:36 PM Reply

you guyz are all too beautiful for words.

peace,

sean

[1] Stephen Robins › durr_T_hip_E 24-Mar-05/12:59 AM Reply

Please do not associate my comments with those of any other user on this website. The fact that "we" (meaning the majority of people to have posted comments on your poems) find your poetry an unremitting conveyor belt of bow'l sausages is solely down to your own boulangarie of failure.

[6] dancin_n_da_moonlite 2-Apr-05/10:06 AM Reply

not to bad actually, but it could use some work for sure, perhaps if you left the one word per line format, and it into like a tanka or haiku or something it would sound better