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The Universe (Free verse) by durr_T_hip_E

stabbing all love infinitely unites heartbeats raging silence perfectly balanced

dancin_n_da_moonlite 2-Apr-05/10:06 AM
not to bad actually, but it could use some work for sure, perhaps if you left the one word per line format, and it into like a tanka or haiku or something it would sound better




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