Re: Good-Bye by RION12 |
10-Mar-05/1:33 PM |
not your best work by far - i think that if this was sung and hade a really creative tune it would work but as simple words it seems slightly lacking - 8 -
-megan
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Re: Love by RION12 |
10-Mar-05/1:34 PM |
it is nice - i like this - but as others have posted before - i think that this is one of lifes unanswered questions -
-megan
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Re: Memories by RION12 |
10-Mar-05/1:35 PM |
seems a too have a touch of fruedian psychology - i like it
-megan
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regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Mar-05/1:42 PM |
i absolutely love this - 10!
-megan
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10-Mar-05/1:43 PM |
i like this - its not your strongest work by far - and your ending is weak - but you bring up good points
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-megan
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10-Mar-05/1:45 PM |
i enjoy this, and if flows very nicely, though the what exactly it is all about if somewhat foggy to me
-megan
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10-Mar-05/1:50 PM |
i absolutely love this it is superb, you right it so well and your theme with the newsman was very nice
-megan
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10-Mar-05/1:54 PM |
i really like all of your work it is written so well, you seem to be an original voice among a sea of overused cliches -kudos
-megan
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10-Mar-05/1:59 PM |
i really like this - though i cannot say i entirely relate
-megan
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10-Mar-05/2:17 PM |
not your best work, i don't feel
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10-Mar-05/2:19 PM |
i really like this - and this is one of the few rhymed poems i have read that i actually enjoyed!
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-megan
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10-Mar-05/2:21 PM |
i really like this - not quite sure what it is but it grabs me
the end is especially good - 10 -
-megan
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10-Mar-05/2:25 PM |
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10-Mar-05/2:26 PM |
i truly enjoyed this
-megan
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10-Mar-05/2:28 PM |
to be honest i dont have any good idea what this is about, but it sounds so nice when i read (the flow of the words, not nescesarily there meanings) that i love it anyway
-megan
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10-Mar-05/2:31 PM |
not your best work - 6 -
-megan
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10-Mar-05/2:36 PM |
i really like this - i am usually not a fan of sonnets or rhyme for that matter but this has a strange allure
-megan
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10-Mar-05/2:37 PM |
i enjoyed this alot
-megan
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Re: Moses by Dovina |
10-Mar-05/2:48 PM |
i really like this
-megan
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Re: LOVE-ABOVE LISTE by Everyone |
13-Mar-05/1:24 PM |
reading it was boring
the idea of it was brilliant
how long did it take you to compile this list
-megan
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