Re: with no words to write (v2) by nentwined	26-Jan-05/10:52 AM
i like this -mega
Re: glimpse by nentwined	26-Jan-05/11:02 AM
i like this -mega
Re: crossroad by calilegzzz	30-Jan-05/3:58 PM
it will get better tomorrow..... (or in the future; for sure) -megan
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Feb-05/7:05 PM
i cannot believe this poem is currently ranked first, not only is it very cliche, but the rhyming is not very well done
Re: The drug prayer by Nitroxide	5-Mar-05/11:25 AM
i like it but it is just a bit long
Re: Decay by INTRANSIT	5-Mar-05/11:27 AM
i absolutely love this! i honestly have no idea why but i sense a brilliance in it! - 10 -
Re: for sue (20030815) by nentwined	5-Mar-05/11:28 AM
i love this it doesnt make much sense to me but the sound of it makes it wonderful anyway - 10 -
Re: Foreplay by INTRANSIT	5-Mar-05/11:38 AM
i like this - 8 -
Re: The Escape by Geschäftsreise	5-Mar-05/11:41 AM
um why dont you write a story not a poem, because this comes across as very unskilled and choppy but you might to nicely if you make it into a short story
Re: one moment to the other by nentwined	5-Mar-05/11:44 AM
i like this alot -9- your word choice was very nice
Re: Doesn't Take Much by Plaidypus	7-Mar-05/3:53 PM
absolutely excellent - 10 - -megan
Re: For China by Fear of Garbage	7-Mar-05/5:32 PM
intersting - i dont really get it though - megan
Re: A Sonnet for Barbara by PatColvin	7-Mar-05/5:46 PM
it is nice as a poem for your wife, but noone else, its rhymes are unimaginative and weak, and it doesnt have a lot of appeal -- sonnets are ahrd though so ill give you a 5 for effort -
Re: Thundershowers and my best friend by NeeMan	7-Mar-05/5:53 PM
i absolutely love this 100%! - 10 - -megan
Re: Come home by phbiscuit	7-Mar-05/6:02 PM
this was really good but just a tad too "sugary" - 8 - -megan
Re: Alone by frdup717	10-Mar-05/1:13 PM
i like this - but i must say i disagree the answers are never in any one else but yourself, and if you are not finding them then you may not be ready to know - but i don't think, even though we would all like to believe otherwise, that the answers can be found in any other person -megan
Re: Harvester of Sorrow by frdup717	10-Mar-05/1:14 PM
nice - i like this alot - -megan
Re: Resurrection by Dreammaker1024	10-Mar-05/1:22 PM
i like this but it is a bit too much all at once i think that the concrete block of words may make people less likely to read it - perhaps if you broke if up into verses or stanzas regardless it was good - megan
Re: The Artist by Dreammaker1024	10-Mar-05/1:28 PM
i really really like this you tell it well -megan p.s. - you are here because you obviously like to wright poetry - so i ask you this why not put her name in the books and the learned memory of those around the world?
Re: Painting by RION12	10-Mar-05/1:31 PM
i like this - it actually reminds me of something i wrote - in fact the theme is very similar (perhaps great minds think alike?) :) you could make it a little bit better if you sharped some of the edges and played with your word choice, but it is overall very nicely done - 9 - -megan