Poemranker [Poem: Good-Bye] [by RION12] Tue Dec 17 18:17:14 PST 2024

Good-Bye (Lyric) by RION12

I'm sorry to say good-bye. It's hard to let you go. My heart is breaking. The pain is makeing me cry. I'm going to miss you dearly. I have to say good-bye.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7613

Posted: September 25, 2004 3:54 PM PDT; Last modified: September 25, 2004 3:54 PM PDT
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Comments:

[8] dancin_n_da_moonlite @ 152.163.100.135 | 10-Mar-05/1:33 PM | Reply

not your best work by far - i think that if this was sung and hade a really creative tune it would work but as simple words it seems slightly lacking - 8 -
-megan

[1] cheese.doodles @ 70.52.169.248 | 8-Apr-07/9:00 AM | Reply

I get the feeling I've read this someplace before; I realize it's because it's the most un-original poem of all time.

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