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Good-Bye (Lyric) by RION12

I'm sorry to say good-bye. It's hard to let you go. My heart is breaking. The pain is makeing me cry. I'm going to miss you dearly. I have to say good-bye.

dancin_n_da_moonlite 10-Mar-05/1:33 PM
not your best work by far - i think that if this was sung and hade a really creative tune it would work but as simple words it seems slightly lacking - 8 -
-megan




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