on oasis by itchiwitch
4 Sep 2002, 7:29 AM
7.magical effect!
on oasis by itchiwitch
4 Sep 2002, 7:29 AM
7.magical effect!
on Walk With Me by Ojiboch
4 Sep 2002, 7:00 AM
"the spontanous overflow of powerful feelings!".I liked it esp "a welcome from reality".In general highly original.
on Someone by Tormentedsoul718
4 Sep 2002, 1:36 AM
"There's no frigate like a book!".It was rather confused.your use of Words are limited.Your feelings highly poetic yet to get something off your chest,they're good enough.So!6
on Birthday Love by Tormentedsoul718
4 Sep 2002, 1:29 AM
without -you-I suppose my summer...?
rework on this.repetitions of feelings could be expressed with variety of words and images.
rework on this.repetitions of feelings could be expressed with variety of words and images.
on Love Turn by Tormentedsoul718
4 Sep 2002, 1:25 AM
I liked the end.A lover's spontaneity of pain is tempestuosly expressed.9
on Dreaming What Seems To Be by Tormentedsoul718
4 Sep 2002, 1:20 AM
I hope you never do that or else we'll miss your lively imagination.I liked and understand it.a proper beginning.(i think to/too much-put it ot/to).wish you success.8
on Do Swans Get Jealous? (#2) by Christof
3 Sep 2002, 8:42 AM
It's one of your best."ebbs away with the shrug of one"memorable and impressive.
on The Stifling Moment by vulcan
3 Sep 2002, 7:56 AM
vulcan thanks you for readng it.
on She Thinks Of Men Waiting by Christof
3 Sep 2002, 7:54 AM
Sorry again!"Until,like welded joints,they freeze"to the end is wonderful.Enrapturing!
on She Thinks Of Men Waiting by Christof
3 Sep 2002, 7:49 AM
It was pure poetry.congratulations!Get them published and I'll be the first to buy!(you may have done it already.I'll be happy to know).Wish you success.
on you're never alone by nentwined
1 Sep 2002, 8:12 AM
Never!
on A journey to the sun by kawakurdi
1 Sep 2002, 8:11 AM
Memorable lines"cry without voice
Die without body"liked it7
Die without body"liked it7
on I'll Be In My Bed, My Grave by longships
1 Sep 2002, 8:02 AM
STRONG!7
on Black Heart by brazen
1 Sep 2002, 2:07 AM
the story is good,but it sounds as if you mean to reach the end of it as quickly as you can.(each sentence has the finality of a finale).I dare suggest you add some lines to your first stanza.something missing.wish you further success.(your angel is exceptional!)7
on Black Heart by brazen
1 Sep 2002, 2:06 AM
the story is good,but it sounds as if you mean to reach the end of it as quickly as you can.(each sentence has the finality of a finale).I dare suggest you add some lines to your first stanza.something missing.wish you further success.(your angel is exceptional!)7
on Tunnel Vision by x311
31 Aug 2002, 8:26 AM
Sorry x311!bother you too much.in your "Guide me"you are at your best.9
on Tunnel Vision by x311
31 Aug 2002, 8:22 AM
I read your "crying beside a lake"
your style has a moving force.my friends have gone too far.poem is in some parts confused,but never0!5.
your style has a moving force.my friends have gone too far.poem is in some parts confused,but never0!5.