| Re: Lightning in the distance by sliver |
23-Jul-09/11:31 PM |
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I just Love the last part of the poem..I recognize the feeling..and "watch that lightning in the distance" reminds me of a beautiful french painting called "Mountain Landscape with Lightning" by Francisque Millet which I like very much..Well done..I think the poem can be developed further..the first part doesn't quite prepares you for the final beautiful relaxation you suggest ..but if only for the finale I give you a 9..
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| Re: Making a Man by Christof |
7-Jul-09/7:59 AM |
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hello dear Chris..hope you're fine..great to see you here again..and read one more of your wonderful poems..you're doing great as before..all the best.
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| Re: Remember me she said by Caducus |
27-Oct-05/9:36 AM |
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| Re: Goethe: Wanderer's Evening Song by Sasha |
2-Nov-04/11:58 AM |
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| Re: Time's End by Quarton |
17-Feb-04/10:58 PM |
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| Re: Tomorrow by Quarton |
30-Aug-03/11:21 AM |
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| Re: a comment on A Matter of Faith by darkshark |
30-May-03/3:31 AM |
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| Re: A Matter of Faith by darkshark |
30-May-03/3:30 AM |
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memeorable lines!liked it extremely!
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| Re: A Thought by darkshark |
30-May-03/3:26 AM |
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Really open-eneded life!nice9
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| Re: Eric D. Brock by elizabethann |
30-May-03/3:13 AM |
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| Re: Crucifixion by Mr Pig |
21-Feb-03/10:33 AM |
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| Re: Elegy by Quarton |
31-Jan-03/10:18 AM |
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really nice!10!2 last stanzas highly moving!
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| Re: The Other Side of Me by Quarton |
23-Jan-03/11:42 PM |
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very well-written Quarton!(and that's because you know exactly what you are writing about!)I enjoyed the flow especially in fourth stanza.10
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| Re: a comment on A Man Of The World by vulcan |
15-Jan-03/10:21 AM |
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Thanks Quarton,I sent you an e-mail explaining about it.
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| Re: a comment on The Golden Rule by Quarton |
15-Jan-03/1:20 AM |
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Get rid of this strictly human level of existance Poet.
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| Re: The Golden Rule by Quarton |
15-Jan-03/1:19 AM |
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I especially liked the second stanza(the best one in my mind).The concluding question proper enough.I liked the Epic Tone of the poem.well-written.and I don't see what a poem is to be condemned beacuse of some mind's deterministic(restrained)attitudes!9
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| Re: electronically by Quarton |
11-Jan-03/6:55 AM |
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I like this one too!not a tired theme as far as it concerns Man and his unchanged state of affairs.we have the examples of electronic comments here too.9/10.I have sent you an e-mail.I like to know your idea about...
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| Re: duality by Quarton |
9-Jan-03/10:52 AM |
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| Re: 6.387 seconds by INTRANSIT |
7-Jan-03/8:02 AM |
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| Re: The Eternal Center by Quarton |
7-Jan-03/2:55 AM |
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What a flow of concept indeed!10!
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